tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4833363376068613049.post1848515275855071689..comments2010-02-25T18:26:13.210-08:00Comments on on the way.....Bishesh: ""ईच्छ्या"", a poemBisheshhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01925744086354839587noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4833363376068613049.post-70898261560556234972009-11-18T09:08:44.977-08:002009-11-18T09:08:44.977-08:00राम्रो लाग्यो कविता । तर यति माथिल्लो स्तरको चेतना...राम्रो लाग्यो कविता । तर यति माथिल्लो स्तरको चेतनामाथि विश्लेषणगर्ने आँट चाहिँ भएन । माफ पाउँ । व्यक्तिगतरूपमा चाहिँ म तारिफ नगरी बस्न सकिन यो कविताको ।Asheshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15807615393645552068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4833363376068613049.post-18664645813453231042009-11-18T09:04:20.212-08:002009-11-18T09:04:20.212-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Asheshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15807615393645552068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4833363376068613049.post-44979806528868213892009-11-18T08:22:57.759-08:002009-11-18T08:22:57.759-08:00ya i got it correct,thank youya i got it correct,thank youBisheshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01925744086354839587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4833363376068613049.post-48208233831749144132009-11-18T08:19:49.721-08:002009-11-18T08:19:49.721-08:00Thank you very much sir,your words r making me ada...Thank you very much sir,your words r making me adamant...further,i m trying to rectify the words though still imnot so good in using nepali unicodes,so it happened...Bisheshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01925744086354839587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4833363376068613049.post-65488942032489318082009-11-18T08:01:34.581-08:002009-11-18T08:01:34.581-08:00Good poem. Be careful in using correct spelling. I...Good poem. Be careful in using correct spelling. I don't think you have spelled the word "asangkhya" correctly. However, it is a woderful wandering of one's emotion and feeling in an attempt to forget past love which is useless to remember if one cannot materialize it. Again very practical line of thought but yet with much poetic sensibility and overwhelming emotion and feeling that is good aspect of poetry especially. Bishes, I see good potential of being good poet in you. All the best, keep it on...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com